Staircases leading to doors that lead to nowhere lol. o_o. The story of this drawing is that she is trapped inside of a dream, and she has to find the right door in order to wake up. The clock without numbers and the question mark in the middle, is supposed to represent the abscence of time. I got the idea of the background from the movie "Labrynth" though the staircases didnt turn out quite right . First off, her right arm (the one that looks a little weird) is not pointed backwards and bent at an awkard angle, it is out to her right side and a little back, meaning YES ITS SUPPOSED TO LOOK LIKE THAT. Just wanted to clear that up . Looks like i may have messed up a little on the crescent moon thing that she's holding . I think this is actually one of my better pieces but ill let you guys be the judge. Tell me what you think!
Oooh, this is really cool. I love all the detail you put into the background. The staircases look really good, and I like how the background looks all warped. Very dreamlike indeed.
There are just a few minor things I wanna point out. I'll start with the face, because that's what caught my eye first. The girl's eyes are really zoned out and creepy looking. A little like this o‿o Try adding some details or something to her eyes and making her look at something.
The clothes look a little 2-d. Look at how real clothing gathers and stretches on people, where all the folds and creases form, and try to draw from those.
That's it, for the most part. There are some really small things, but I don't wanna be nitpicky. So in short, this is a really awesome piece! Keep up the good work. ^^
Thanks a lot for the good critique, i apreciate it . And i know what you mean about the small things cause i just spotted a couple noticable lines and things out of the ordinary . I hate when that happends lol.
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There are just a few minor things I wanna point out. I'll start with the face, because that's what caught my eye first. The girl's eyes are really zoned out and creepy looking. A little like this o‿o Try adding some details or something to her eyes and making her look at something.
The clothes look a little 2-d. Look at how real clothing gathers and stretches on people, where all the folds and creases form, and try to draw from those.
That's it, for the most part. There are some really small things, but I don't wanna be nitpicky. So in short, this is a really awesome piece! Keep up the good work. ^^
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